Hellenic Article Draft: Feedback Requested

So, I am mostly finished up working on my article for the new "He Epistole" called "Things They Never Told About Forming a Hellenic Ritual Group" and it turned out to be not only long, but it seems a bit rambly to me (my brain has been so "mushy" the last few days that I had some trouble being coherant). It certainly doesn't have to be any great work of journalism, but I would at least like it to be somewhat useful.

I need to turn in the final draft tomorrow for the deadline, but before then, I wanted to see what you guys thought and if you think I need to change anything.

( Things They Never Told You About Forming a Hellenic Ritual Group )